What do you think of this?Does it make sense to you guys?

Completely submerged, lost forever in an asphyxiated state that seems almost majestic, is where she finds herself. The tightening begins as eruptions of the carbon dioxide rise to the surface. With each burst comes relief from inner toils that she has finally been able to break free of. One after another they rise as she falls. Fading fast she realises that she is now more alive than she had ever been. She draws in the final gulp, awakens from the darken, looks not at what was left behind and turns the page to the new chapter.